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This is very nice, however there are several things you may want to fix. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

VISION: This is really cute however I can see multiple anatomy problems, and a couple things you may wish to do better. Firstly, I would add a nice big nose to enhance the adorability (is that a word? It is now haha) of the picture. I also STRONGLY suggest you NOT to use a simple circle for the head. At the very least, add some fur tufts at the sides of the head. Be aware of your lines as well, they are a bit unneat. Overall: 2/5

ORIGINALITY: I have seen many things like this before such as the pose and the "Thanks for the Watch" text, sometimes in the same picture! I assume you want to put this on other people's pages to thank them for the watch? I think you should change some things to make the image really pop out to the person you are thanking, such as a unique pose or a more interesting, colourful text. Overall: 1.5/5

TECHNIQUE: Some things could have been done better in the picture, like the circle for the head and the messy lines (especially the ones near/on the legs). Did you do this on MS Paint? I would suggest you use the Curved Line tool! I use it ALL THE TIME, and it is a HUGE lifesaver, especially with mouse users and those with shaky hands. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/m/m…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="578" title="Meow :3"/> Overall: 1.5/5

IMPACT: I can't really say that this will really stand out for anyone at the moment, like I said before you should add a more unique pose. Overall: 1/5

I suppose that's it! Please don't take offense to anything written here, I am only trying to help. There are other great things in the image too- overall this is really cute and I love the tail! Keep up the nice work, you will improve in time!! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>